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A Christmas Carrol
A discussion by Group Tamagochi
9 responses to “A Christmas Carrol”
After listening to your discussion, I thought that your discussion needed to connect to the story. This is a problem because the discussion was about “A Christmas Carrol.” One way to fix this problem is to quote from the story and to state some reasons. If you do that, your discussion will be more logical.
I thought that it was sometimes difficult to hear the sound of this discussion. And the speed of talking is a little early. You should be careful about loudness and sped. If you do that, we can listen to the discussion easily.
I think the members of Tamagotchi can communicate and respond in their discussion. However, I felt that the discussion had nothing much to do with the book they had read. I want them to use the book the name of Christmas Carol and topics that focused on the characters in the books to discuss. If you discuss the contents of a book with relevant opinions, you can engage in a more compelling discussion.
I had a problem from this discussion. I feel their talking quantity has a gap. In other words, there is a person who more talk than another person. They have to say own ideas possibly to fix this problem. If you do that, the discussion will make more ideas.
I think your discussion is too short compared to other groups. This is a problem because if the discussion is short, it means you don’t have deeper conversations. To fix this problem, you can ask persons who have different opinions more deeply, or express your ideas from your real experience about donation. If you do that, your discussion will be more active.
After listening to their discussion, I thought their opinions were not connected to the book so much. Their discussion was so good at the point of reaction after each comments, however, it seemed they put the book aside. One way to solve this problem is finding evidences from the book to support your opinion. If they solve this problem, their discussion will be more meaningful one.
I think the lack of the summarize of the discussion is a problem. This is because it is difficult to remember and understand what the speakers are talking about. To fix this problem, I think it is better to add more summarize by the moderator. If you do that, it will be more easy to remember and understand your discussion.
I thought there weren’t many questions in our group. This is the reason why the conversation doesn’t continue or the conversation doesn’t work. I think we need to ask more questions to continue the discussion. In addition to answering questions, the discussion expands when we answer questions. By doing so, I think it will be a more active conversation.
After listening to your discussion, I found that your tone of voice seems too nervous. I think this is a problem because it makes the listers worry. One way to fix this problem is to talk relaxed by practicing again and again. If you do so, your discussion will be more attractive to listen to.
9 responses to “A Christmas Carrol”
After listening to your discussion, I thought that your discussion needed to connect to the story. This is a problem because the discussion was about “A Christmas Carrol.” One way to fix this problem is to quote from the story and to state some reasons. If you do that, your discussion will be more logical.
I thought that it was sometimes difficult to hear the sound of this discussion. And the speed of talking is a little early. You should be careful about loudness and sped. If you do that, we can listen to the discussion easily.
I think the members of Tamagotchi can communicate and respond in their discussion. However, I felt that the discussion had nothing much to do with the book they had read. I want them to use the book the name of Christmas Carol and topics that focused on the characters in the books to discuss. If you discuss the contents of a book with relevant opinions, you can engage in a more compelling discussion.
I had a problem from this discussion. I feel their talking quantity has a gap. In other words, there is a person who more talk than another person. They have to say own ideas possibly to fix this problem. If you do that, the discussion will make more ideas.
I think your discussion is too short compared to other groups. This is a problem because if the discussion is short, it means you don’t have deeper conversations. To fix this problem, you can ask persons who have different opinions more deeply, or express your ideas from your real experience about donation. If you do that, your discussion will be more active.
After listening to their discussion, I thought their opinions were not connected to the book so much. Their discussion was so good at the point of reaction after each comments, however, it seemed they put the book aside. One way to solve this problem is finding evidences from the book to support your opinion. If they solve this problem, their discussion will be more meaningful one.
I think the lack of the summarize of the discussion is a problem. This is because it is difficult to remember and understand what the speakers are talking about. To fix this problem, I think it is better to add more summarize by the moderator. If you do that, it will be more easy to remember and understand your discussion.
I thought there weren’t many questions in our group. This is the reason why the conversation doesn’t continue or the conversation doesn’t work. I think we need to ask more questions to continue the discussion. In addition to answering questions, the discussion expands when we answer questions. By doing so, I think it will be a more active conversation.
After listening to your discussion, I found that your tone of voice seems too nervous. I think this is a problem because it makes the listers worry. One way to fix this problem is to talk relaxed by practicing again and again. If you do so, your discussion will be more attractive to listen to.