Reviewed by Kanna Fujiwara, Ayana Soga, Mahiro Yuki, Jintaro Soejima
- Summery
This book is about information on New York City. For example, the location, famous buildings and the history. New York is a world-class city in culture and economy. New York City has a thriving trade due to its port.
- Relevance to modern life
The book says that New York is called “The Big Apple.” There are various theories as to why, but two prevailing theories are that New York is called The Big Apple. One is that the term was first coined in the 1970s, when unemployed people started selling lots of apples in New York City. The other is that at the turn of the 21st century, the famous American company Apple grew in power and opened a large store in the city, which has now become a global company and deserves to be named The Big Apple. New York city is now the world’s leading metropolis, and has become the “world capital city” because there are many multinational corporations.
- Important aspects of the story
This book discusses a variety of things related to New York City. Among them, I think that the shopping section is the most sympathetic. 75 percent of all American-made clothing is made in New York City. It is also famous for its department stores, with the Macy’s department store, which opened in 1858, the largest department store in the world. In addition, Cartier, Tiffany & Co. and Gucci, which sells luxury jewelry, are all located near Central Park, and Tiffany & Co. was famous for the movie “Breakfast at Tiffany’s,” a movie that starred Audrey Hepburn.
- Conclusion
10 responses to “New York by Vicky Shipton”
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